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Oh look post-DH writing!!

I drabbled, because shocolate was bored and as you know, she commands the fandom ;)

Title: After the Sandwiches
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13

“Is he asleep?”

“Yes, I think so.” Hermione’s voice was soft as she gazed at their best friend, finally sleeping soundly, full of Kreacher’s finest sandwich making efforts, in the curtained bed.

Ron tried to ignore the ache of sadness that threatened to bubble up through her words, the flood of tears that was just beneath the surface… of everything.


Ron’s tone of finality caused Hermione to turn her still dust-covered face to meet his gaze, which instantly dropped to her slightly-parted lips

“Why’s that?” Hermione’s breath hitched as Ron moved closer.

“I don’t want to be interrupted, again.”


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Aug. 14th, 2007 11:45 pm (UTC)
i hadn't realized til i read this that harry actually interrupted r/hr. i mean, i knew, but it hadn't sunk in. if that makes any sense.

in any case, good stuff =]
Aug. 16th, 2007 03:11 am (UTC)
very very nice! Short and full of emotion. Great job.
Aug. 16th, 2007 03:32 am (UTC)
I love a good drabble. I love writing them and I love reading them. This one is wonderful.

What I love the most is that Ron's eyes go to her lips... not her breasts or any other body part -- her lips. That is so romantic I can hardly stand it!
Aug. 16th, 2007 05:48 am (UTC)
Oh, god, you know what bugged me most about the end? Is that you never saw Ron and Hermione's reaction. And here it is, with a bit of snogging thrown in. Glory be!
Aug. 16th, 2007 07:45 am (UTC)
lovely - don't wake up now Harry, you may be in for a shock.
Nov. 17th, 2007 06:54 pm (UTC)
great story, i was wondering if you can added me as a friend. i would be very greatful.
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