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10k_drabbles Entry for George/Luna

Title: Heavenly
Pairing: George Weasley/Luna Lovegood
Rating: R
Word Count: 100


"Oh, George!"

Night pale fingers wrap in shimmering orange flames.

Energy surges, like spells rapid fire through her core.

George's tongue releases deliciously grand explosions, his best fireworks, behind Luna's eyes.

This is why the moon and sun
Will rarely share one sky
Earth cannot behold such passion
And overcome would die.


George stops only when her pleasure-weakened fingers loose their hold.

He smiles like a god.

Luna grins like a fool.

Their mouths meet. His lips --the very freckles of his chin-- are slick, shining… with her.

"Yes, more than friends," she whispers.

"And more than lovers," he answers.


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X-posted to 10k_drabbles character threads and georgeluna

Comments

( 19 comments — Leave a comment )
aberforths_rug
Jul. 19th, 2006 11:26 pm (UTC)
Wow!

That is truly amazing. To create all of that with just 100 words -- brilliant.

Not only is this hot and lovely on the surface, but you really have tapped into some huge and ancient images as well. Wonderful!
ladytory
Jul. 20th, 2006 12:03 am (UTC)
I had to keep checking it, even I didn't believe it was 100 words and I counted them as I was writing!

I am glad that you liked it. I was rather happy with being able to use a grand scope in such a short piece.
melusinahp
Jul. 19th, 2006 11:36 pm (UTC)
Yummy.

This is an especially beautiful image, "Night pale fingers wrap in shimmering orange flames."
ladytory
Jul. 19th, 2006 11:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you.

I am rather fond of it as well. :D
browneydweasley
Jul. 19th, 2006 11:38 pm (UTC)
OH!!!!!!!! You say so much with such few words...it's beautiful. Hot, sexy, and the lovies... I hate to call this a drabble--I think it's HP poetry (in the fashion of Pablo Neruda) instead!
ladytory
Jul. 19th, 2006 11:59 pm (UTC)
I love him.

That was one of the nicest reviews I have ever received.
mugglewitch1
Jul. 20th, 2006 12:00 am (UTC)
WOW. This was wonderful.
ladytory
Jul. 20th, 2006 02:25 am (UTC)
Thanks dear.
pan_alchemist
Jul. 20th, 2006 02:16 am (UTC)
Excellent again, Tory!

You realy write this pairing very well.

Loved your choice of words and the poem. It comes across very powerfully.
ladytory
Jul. 20th, 2006 02:26 am (UTC)
Thanks and thanks for doing a preview read for me as well.

You are a dear!

*hugs*
mizufae
Jul. 20th, 2006 05:49 am (UTC)
naughty!
and *delightful*. where's my george, huh?
ladytory
Jul. 21st, 2006 03:06 am (UTC)
Glad you liked it dear! :D
miz_tith
Jul. 20th, 2006 08:26 am (UTC)
See I told you you were the Queen of George/Luna.
Somethings are just better left to...well to you.

That was amazing
ladytory
Jul. 21st, 2006 03:06 am (UTC)
Thanks poppet, that means a lot.
green_kiwigirl
Jul. 20th, 2006 01:49 pm (UTC)
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

::dies::

That was really beautiful!
ladytory
Jul. 21st, 2006 03:07 am (UTC)
Thanks!

Hope you aren't dead for too long!! ;-)
phoenixankaa
Jul. 20th, 2006 06:47 pm (UTC)
Paints a wonderful picture in the imagination Tory!

I love it as always!
ladytory
Jul. 21st, 2006 03:07 am (UTC)
Thanks bunches PK!
Glad you approve!
keldie
Jul. 21st, 2006 09:33 am (UTC)
THAT...is truly AWESOME  !!   
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